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 Well, here you go, Nan! I promised you this how long ago? lol And I finally did it... and to misquote J.K.Rowling "...it was the last time I was going to be doing a Pensieve scene." Now I remember why I cheaped out last time! That's bloody confusing!

Title: The Mary Sue Virus
Chapter Title: Remembrance
Fandom: Harry Potter
Rating: 18+
Warnings: Graphic Sexual situations, Oral, Angst
Disclaimer: The recognizable characters in this work of fiction and the world it is set in are the property of J.K Rowling and Warner Bros. Pictures. The original characters are the property of Dazzledfirestar, Nanaea, Madapple and Polywolly, and are not to be used without the permission of those individuals. I am not making any money from this and it is purely a flight of fancy for the purpose of entertainment.

 
“But Professor Flitwick, this is important!” Rowena tried to plead with the head of her house to get her and Issobell in to see Dumbledore.
 
“I am sorry, Miss Crystal, but the headmaster is not available to anyone at this time. As soon as I can, I will let him know you wish to speak with him.” Noting the disappointment on her face, he sighed. “I’m sure it won’t be long.” With that the tiny man disappeared around a corner.
 
“Well, at least, he’ll hear that we need to talk to him.” Issobell tried unsuccessfully to stifle a yawn.
 
Rowena smiled. “Haven’t slept much in the past few days?”
 
Issobell shook her head. “I think I’m going to get something to eat, and take a nap. Let me know when you hear anything?”
 
Rowena nodded and watched as Issobell headed toward the Great Hall. She considered going back to the library, but changed her mind and headed toward Ravenclaw tower. She walked slowly, people watching as she went. She had to admit to herself that without the constant drama that her friends and Draco seemed to provide, she was a little bored. Without knowing exactly how she’d gotten there, she found herself face to face with the Ravenclaw knocker.
 
“I give you a group of three. One is sitting down, and will never get up. The second eats as much as is given to him, yet is always hungry. The third goes away and never returns.”
 
She stood for a moment, thinking the riddle through. She really wasn’t in the mood for this. Then the answer came to her. “A group of three? Stove, fire and smoke!”
 
The knocker nodded. “You have a quick mind.” And the door swung open. She ignored the small groups of students sitting in the common room and went straight up to the dorms. She knew her roommates were gone for the week, and an idea had occurred to her. Something that Draco had said had stuck in her head. After all, you still have the pensieve. A smile crept across her face as she pulled the basin out from under her bed and watched for a moment as the silvery memories floated around like liquid smoke. She took a deep breath and plunged into the basin.
 
She found herself following herself through the hallways leading to the Great Hall. It was dark, obviously very late at night. Her memory self walked slowly and quietly, prepared to jump into the shadows to hide at any moment. She pushed the heavy oak door to the hall open and flinched when it creaked. She jumped when she heard a voice come from the dark expanse in front of her.
 
“I was beginning to think you weren't going to show.” Draco moved into a bit of light that shone through the window.
 
“Look,” She whispered, looking nervously behind herself as she moved into the hall. “All this sneaking around may be a turn on for you, but…” She didn’t get a chance to finish her sentence. He moved quickly through the darkness, and before she could protest any more his lips were on hers. Rowena moved closer to the couple as Draco’s hand slipped slowly up her memory self’s thigh. Her eyes grew wider as she realized that she could feel what he had done to her, was doing to her… she shook her head, trying to clear it. All she knew was that her body was reacting the same way her memory self’s body was. This could be far more fun than she thought.
 
The memory Rowena however had one or two more doubts. “Draco,” She managed to pull herself out of the kiss. “What if Filch comes in?”
 
Draco smirked. “I’ve got it covered.” He pulled her closer, his hand creeping back up her thigh and he leaned in for another kiss.
 
Rowena leaned back. “How exactly do you have it covered?”
 
He sighed, realizing that unless she knew she wasn’t going to get expelled for this, he wasn’t going to get anywhere. “Filch is more than busy in the courtyard right now, believe me. “I told Crabbe and Goyle to let Hagrid’s collection of Jarveys lose there. It should keep Filch busy for hours.”
 
“Draco!” Rowena’s eyes grew bigger. “That’s… really very…” her lecture seemed to fade from her memory as Draco pushed her slowly back toward the Ravenclaw table, kissing her neck as they went. When the back of her legs hit the bench, she looked back to see what she’d hit. “Umm… I eat here.”
 
Draco laughed quietly. “Okay, then.” He picked her up and carried her across the room. “Let’s dirty up the Gryffindors’ table then.” He set her down on the long wooden table at the far side of the hall, and climbed up to join her. “I’m sure they won’t mind.” He smiled down at her before claiming her mouth in a passionate kiss and letting his hands roam over her body. He quickly worked a few of the buttons on her blouse open, exposing the white lace bra she had on underneath. He slid his hand over her covered breasts and kissed softly down her neck to her collarbone, eliciting a moan in return.
 
Her hands moved quickly over his body, working their way to his belt and the fly of his pants. She could feel how hard he was already, and she wanted nothing more than to have him inside her. She moaned his name as his fingers slipped between her and the crotch of her panties, quickly finding her centre and driving her into a frenzy. She pulled at his belt and nearly ripped a loop from his pants as she removed the offending piece of leather.
 
Rowena watched from the nearest bench as her memory self arched against Draco as he slipped two fingers into her. She couldn’t help herself. She slipped on hand beneath her skirt and began to play with her already swollen clit. She didn’t take her eyes off the couple before her as her fingers circled the delicate nub. She moaned and slipped a finger into her entrance as her memory self finally succeeded in freeing Draco from his pants. She heard her memory self cry out as Draco thrust powerfully into her, shaking the table slightly. She listened to herself beg him to fuck her harder. She listened to Draco moan as he pounded into her. She closed her eyes and let herself get swept up in the sounds of the two of them, her fingers driving her closer and closer to the edge. Her eyes shot open as she heard her memory self’s voice.

“Draco! Oh gods!” All words seemed to fail her as she threw her head back and screamed, her body tensed and arched underneath him. His rhythm didn’t slow. He continued the punishing pace as she came over and over again, her voice finally giving out. His own climax was close.
 
Rowena could tell, and she sped up the pace of her fingers, hoping to come with him. It was almost as if he sensed her need as he reached between him and the Rowena beneath him and began playing with her clit. The added sensation sent Rowena into overload and she cried out, an intense orgasm washing over her just as Draco came deep inside her memory self.
 
They stayed connected for a moment, letting all three of them gather their wits again. Draco looked up at the ceiling and grinned. “Nothing like sex under the stars.” Both Rowenas giggled at that. Finally, the two lovers got off the table, straightened themselves up and headed for the doors. Memory Rowena had a blush on her cheeks that even the dark couldn’t hide. “Do you think anyone heard us?”
 
In the blink of an eye, Rowena was back where she’d started, sitting on her bed in her dorm, by herself. She leaned back against her pillow and sighed, feeling totally satiated. Maybe being alone wasn’t as bad as she thought.

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Date: 2008-01-12 04:01 pm (UTC)
ladydeathfaerie: (the Master in Drag)
From: [personal profile] ladydeathfaerie
see, i knew this would be here when i got up this morning. damn it, woman. you're making me feel positively lazy. then again..... frigging War and Peace must have taken forever to write.

ummm.... one little thing. Finally, the two lovers got off the table, straighten themselves up and headed for the doors.

should be straightened. but that's the only thing i noticed that should be tweaked. don't get me started actually doing beta work... *sighs*

still, i loved it. great chapter, hon. *applauds, then wanders off to work on her own chapter.....*

This could be far more fun than she thought.

Date: 2008-01-12 05:54 pm (UTC)
nanaeanaven: Permanently Tired (Default)
From: [personal profile] nanaeanaven
I'm glad I put off taking a shower to read this chapter, because otherwise I would have ending up needing another (cold) one. =^_^=

Loved the part about dirtying up the Gryffindor table instead, and, well, everything. I can see where it would be confusing to write, but I think you did a great job!

There are a couple other tense issues I noticed:

He slid his hand over her covered breasts and kissing(ed) softly down her neck to her collarbone, eliciting a moan in return.

All words seemed to fail her as she threw her head back and screamed, her body tensed and arching(ed) underneath him.

Re: This could be far more fun than she thought.

Date: 2008-01-12 10:44 pm (UTC)
nanaeanaven: Permanently Tired (Default)
From: [personal profile] nanaeanaven
No, it's definitely not too bad for 2 a.m.

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Date: 2008-01-13 05:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ginevrasm.livejournal.com
Another yummy chapter.

I actually read it way early this morning. Just before skipping off to work. Nice way to wake up. I just didn't have time to comment right then.

Absolutely loved the bit about dirtying up the Gryffindor table.

Can't wait to read more!

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Date: 2008-01-13 05:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ginevrasm.livejournal.com
God knows I needed it. Hate working Saturdays. Normally I have flex time. But for this OT stuff, we're at the mercy of whichever manager comes in. 7AM. Blech!

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Date: 2008-01-13 06:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] manic-olive.livejournal.com
Daz,

I cannot believe you got another Chapter posted so quickly. I think you did a great job with the pensieve chapter and I agree that the Gryffindor table line was very funny, had a chuckle over that as well.

I am excited for another update.

~Mad

btw. I found a small typo:

“But Professor Flitwick, this is important!” Rowena tried to plea plead? with the head of her house to get her and Issobell in to see Dumbledore.
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