marysuevirus | Chapter 30

Okay, so here we go again! I'm wallowing in a Sue and it's not mine! lol I've been playing with this idea for a long long time now, but I just couldn't figure out a way to make it work, and then I thought, hey, she's a Sue... there are no consequences when you're a Sue! Anyway, I hope you all like it.

Title: The Mary Sue Virus
Chapter Title: Identical
Fandom: Harry Potter
Rating: 18+
Warnings: Graphic Sexual situations, Oral, Threesome, Angst
Disclaimer: The recognizable characters in this work of fiction and the world it is set in are the property of J.K Rowling and Warner Bros. Pictures. The original characters are the property of Dazzledfirestar, Nanaea, Madapple and Polywolly, and are not to be used without the permission of those individuals. I am not making any money from this and it is purely a flight of fancy for the purpose of entertainment.

After a pleasant evening with the Weasley clan, Hyacinth stretched and headed towards the stairs. “I think I’m going to have to call it a night. It’s been a long day.” She smiled as they bid her a good night and she began the climb up to George and Fred’s room.

She had been surprised how well dinner had gone. It seemed that after her blow up with Ginny, the rest of the family had figured she must be alright. Molly had sat her next to Charlie and she had been treated to a thorough education in dragons during the meal. In fact, she was truly enjoying herself. She chuckled slightly to herself, imagining Azalea’s reaction to that bit of information.

Fred and George had gone up to their room earlier, claiming that they had work to do, but as Hyacinth reached the door, she began to doubt that was what was going on. She couldn’t smell anything in the way of smoke or the other rancid smells that their experiments usually produced. There were no explosions, in fact, it was so quiet that she could hear their voices through the door, and neither of them sounded happy.

“She won’t do it, Fred. I’m not going to screw this up because you have a soft spot for the good old days!” George was obviously trying to keep his voice down so that the rest of the family didn’t hear him.

“Angelina did it, and she stuck around.” Fred stated matter-of-factly.

“We were kids! This is different.” George shot back.

“How?” Fred’s voice rose slightly. “You kept her a secret for two years, George, from me. That’s the only difference I see here. We always said…”

He stopped as Hyacinth pushed the door open. Her cheeks flushed as they both stared at her for a moment. “Sorry. I’ll just… ummm…” She hurried across the room and grabbed her toothbrush and practically sprinted for the door.

“No, wait.” Fred grabbed her wrist, pulling her back into the room. “George has something he needs to talk to you about.” He let go and smiled. “I’ll be back in a bit.” He quickly left the room, closing the door behind him.

George sat down on his bed, looking just a little stressed. He sighed heavily before he spoke. “You might want to sit down for this, luv.” Hyacinth’s mind kicked into overdrive, imagining every horrible possibility before he began to speak again. “The thing is…” He began fiddling with the edge of the covers. “Well, when Fred and I were at Hogwarts, before I met you, we had…” he seemed to search for the right word. “We had this kind of pact, I guess. We shared everything.”

“You’ve told me about that.” Hyacinth put her hand on his.

“No, not really.” He finally lifted his eyes to hers. “I mean we shared everything.” Her eyes widened as the reality of what he was saying set in.

She spoke slowly. “And Fred wants to…”

“Continue the tradition. Yeah.” George took a deep breath. “I told him you’d say no.”

“So when he was dating Angelina, the three of you…”

“Only a few times. When I started dating you, it all stopped. I’m sorry I had to bring it up but…” She lifted her hand.

“Do you want to?” She locked her eyes on his, and waited for an answer. Something in his eyes told her that part of him did, indeed want this.

“I don’t want to do anything to make you uncomfortable.”

“That’s not what I asked you.” She took his hand and brought his fingers to her lips, softly kissing them. “If you want to, I’ll do it.”

His eyes grew wider this time. “Really?”

She laughed softly. “Who am I to break with tradition?” He pulled her into a passionate kiss. When she finally broke away she smiled. “I don’t want to come between you two.”

“Actually, that’s kind of the idea.” She looked up and saw Fred standing in the doorway. He moved into the room and closed the door. He quickly pulled out his wand, warded the door, and muttered a quick soundproofing charm. He sat down beside Hyacinth. “You don’t have to do this.” He said quietly. “If you really don’t want to…”

She threw a quick look at George and then turned to Fred, pressing her lips to his and silencing him. She felt George’s hand creep up her thigh as she continued to kiss Fred. Finally, she pulled back, trying to catch her breath. “So, umm…” She felt her cheeks flush a little. “How exactly do we do this?” She let out a nervous laugh. “Do you two have a system?”

The twins exchanged a look before Fred spoke. “It’s your show, mate.”

George pulled Hyacinth into a passionate kiss, his hand creeping higher on her thigh. His lips traveled over to her ear. “I think this should be your show, luv.”

She pulled back slowly, getting to her feet and facing them. A smile crept across her face as she slipped her top over her head. She threw it into a corner and it was followed by her bra, skirt and panties. George simply smiled at her little performance, but Fred’s jaw had dropped. His eyes took in her form as she slowly revealed it. She stood there for a moment, letting the cool draft play across her skin. She bit her lip suggestively. “Okay, where do you want me?”

George gestured toward the bed, and she crawled up onto it, her head toward Fred. Both men slipped out of their clothes and joined her as quickly as they could manage. George kissed her between her shoulder blades as he climbed in behind her and slipped his fingers between her thighs, getting a moan for his efforts. The moan was cut short however as Fred passionately claimed her lips. She pulled back and gasped as George’s fingers began to circle her clit, but she soon turned her attention to the twin in front of her, letting her lips wander down from his lips to his neck. She did her best to remain focused on what she was doing as George slipped two fingers into her and she couldn’t help but groan against Fred’s chest as George’s fingers were replaced with his cock. He moved slowly, giving her time to reach her other goal.

As she ran her tongue along Fred’s erection, she almost giggled. Yup, completely identical. He groaned as she wrapped her lips around him and began to bob her head in the same rhythm that George had set as he pounded into her. The harder he drove himself into her, the harder it became to keep the same rhythm. Fred didn’t seem to mind. She looked up at him, and would have smiled if she could. His eyes were closed, his mouth open and the occasional moan or gasp escaped.

Behind her George was watching with a keen interest. Fred had always told him that when they had done this with Angelina, it had been such a turn on to watch his girl from a completely different perspective. In fact, he seemed to be right. George was working very hard to keep his control, but he was sure that he wasn’t going to last at this rate. He reached around Hyacinth and slid his fingers between the wet folds of her sex, finding her clit again. She let out a low moan around Fred’s cock, and both she and Fred shivered at the new sensation.

Fred’s eyes rolled back and he let out a moan as the vibrations from Hyacinth’s voice quivered through his balls. It wasn’t going to take much more to get him off, and he knew it. Luckily, from the look of things George and Hyacinth weren’t too far behind him.

Hyacinth felt every muscle in her body begin the tense. She had been sure her body was going into overload before George had begun lavishing attention on her clit and as her first orgasm hit her she cried out, letting Fred’s cock slip from her lips. As she regained some amount of control, she wrapped her hand around the waiting erection in front of her and swirled her tongue slowly around its swollen head. She vaguely heard George moan at this display but she did hear Fred warn her before his climax overtook him. She had only a moment to decide and she let instinct take over. She took his cock deeper into her throat, catching every last drop as he came. He slipped out of her mouth and propped himself up against the footboard of the bed, looking very satisfied and ready to enjoy the last bit of the show.

Hyacinth could feel another orgasm building and she leaned back into George, putting her arm around his neck and moaning loudly as his pace quickened. She threw her head back, resting it on his shoulder as she came again. Her muscles milked him for all he was worth and his climax quickly followed hers. They collapsed back against the headboard, and Hyacinth cuddled up to George. He smiled and kissed the top of her head before she fell asleep in his arms.

Slowly, Fred got to his feet and grabbed his pajamas, slipping into them. He smiled at his brother, who was watching his girl sleep. “You’ve got yourself a good one there, mate.” Fred tucked himself into his own bed and rolled over. “Don’t screw it up.”

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*sigh*

Great lemon, Daz. I am one lucky Sue! (I mean Hyacinth is. . .well, you know what I mean.) I see you managed to kick the Weasley boys into, erm. . ., gear. yeah.

Twins *sigh* I love love love how there are no recriminations in Mary Sue-niverse

I wonder if any of the elder Weasley's actually find out where she, Hyacinth, is spending her nights, that should be interesting, especially if Ginny or Hermione blow the whistle!

I am also anxious to see what you have in store for the other Sues, and the Quidditch World Cup should be coming soon as well, right? right? right? (lol)

Then Dumbledore's plan will have been carried out. Honestly, this is almost as bad as waiting for one of JKR's novels, just please don't make us wait two years for an update, lol.

Is it necessary for me to add that I'm waiting here expectantly for your next chapter? (I thought not.)

*hugs*

~Mad

Btw, I found a small typo:

She vaguely heard George moan at this display be she did hear Fred warn her before his climax overtook him.

Typo fixed! Thanks for spotting that.

And no, I won't make you wait two years for an update. I think things will be moving along at a fairly brisk pace from this point on... the smut levels may be a bit lower though... we'll see.

Glad you liked this one... I have to admit, I was a little worried. lol

Omigod! Omigod! I'm positively giddy...I so was not expecting to find a new HP chapter...And the twins...Threesome...

Yow!

I was going to take a nap, but how can I sleep with that image in my head?

I don't think one can sleep with images like that in their head... I know I sure can't. Perhaps you should work on the next chapter of the Mutant Sue Virus. It might help you purge such images. ;)

Mmmmm....

I think you just kick-started my Weasley Twins muse. LOL

I do my best. :D

mmmm. with all this smut happening up one side and down the other, one would think i'd be able to manage to write my own.

*crosses fingers*

here's hoping...

Hey, anything I can do to help, ldf! You know that. lol

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