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This is such a well constructed story, I can't even begin to tell you how much of a great ride it is! At the early stages, I'll admit to being more than a *bit* concerned about so many plot threads but damned if you haven't neatly, logically, and perfectly brought them together, resolved them, and are on your way to ending the whole damned thing with one big red bow. That, my dear, takes lots of skill and talent, and I applaud you heartily as you have voluminous amounts of both! :-)

Loved the gals coming to terms with their own feelings about Aedan's kidnapping and how they'd treated her before it. The visions and whatnot reinforcing their already substantial guilt when the feel/see what Aedan is going through....gets ya right here! *points at her heart*

Oh man, that line "Shall I show you a dork?" kills me. :-)

And this scene with JC and Edward and all...oh man. Gretchen, thou art in a shitload of trouble. :-)

Also loved the scene with JC and Zerbrowski. I don't recall seeing those two interact very often in the books that I've read so far (please correct me though ;-) ), but I really enjoyed their interaction the way you wrote it. :-)

Yup. I kinda liked this chapter too. :-) Best bday gift ever!!! ;-) xxoo