yes. there is much tension in this chapter. and i'm glad that you don't bite your nails cos, knowing you, you'd take your finger tips off , too.
the confrontations i think made this chapter more than the action stuff did. those boys found out what its like to wake up on the wrong side of a woman's temper, let me tell you.
the emotions are... up there. seriously. i'm glad that all came across. and i'm glad you're enjoying this. (yes, Papa Fury has impeccable timing.*grins*)
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Date: 2012-01-08 07:14 pm (UTC)the confrontations i think made this chapter more than the action stuff did. those boys found out what its like to wake up on the wrong side of a woman's temper, let me tell you.
the emotions are... up there. seriously. i'm glad that all came across. and i'm glad you're enjoying this. (yes, Papa Fury has impeccable timing.*grins*)
thanks for reading, bb.