i'm glad you got to read, sweetie. and i'm glad you enjoyed.
cop and religious zealot, huh? is there any thing i can't do well?
yeah, i love Jason's conversation with Dolph. just a little bit of Jason's smart mouth without being too obvious.
i guess my dislike of him really shows in this piece. i shouldn't use him that way, but i don't think he'd be all nice and cuddly with the girls just yet. it hasn't been that long since Anita's death and he is grieving. they've taken her place and he isn't quite ready to deal with that. i think everyone is a touch more pragmatic than he is in that respect. of course, i'm sure some of them are holding it all in. you know how men are.
already plotting out the next chapter. hopefully it won't be too long.
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Date: 2008-08-29 03:12 am (UTC)cop and religious zealot, huh? is there any thing i can't do well?
yeah, i love Jason's conversation with Dolph. just a little bit of Jason's smart mouth without being too obvious.
i guess my dislike of him really shows in this piece. i shouldn't use him that way, but i don't think he'd be all nice and cuddly with the girls just yet. it hasn't been that long since Anita's death and he is grieving. they've taken her place and he isn't quite ready to deal with that. i think everyone is a touch more pragmatic than he is in that respect. of course, i'm sure some of them are holding it all in. you know how men are.
already plotting out the next chapter. hopefully it won't be too long.