Nanaea A. Naven (
nanaeanaven
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marysuevirus
2007-10-18 11:56 pm (UTC)
Squee!
I'm so happy that you've decided to post this here.
Now for the nit picky stuff.
"They all nodded. “Jesus...”
He(r)
next words were interrupted by a knock at the door."
“Wait a minute... we all
look
ed
fabulous... all have perfect accents... and those names...”
(I notice that you made the beginning a bit more generic too. ~_^)
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Squee!
Now for the nit picky stuff.
"They all nodded. “Jesus...” He(r) next words were interrupted by a knock at the door."
“Wait a minute... we all look
edfabulous... all have perfect accents... and those names...”(I notice that you made the beginning a bit more generic too. ~_^)