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Nanaea A. Naven ([personal profile] nanaeanaven) wrote in [community profile] marysuevirus 2007-10-18 11:56 pm (UTC)

Squee!

I'm so happy that you've decided to post this here.

Now for the nit picky stuff.

"They all nodded. “Jesus...” He(r) next words were interrupted by a knock at the door."

“Wait a minute... we all looked fabulous... all have perfect accents... and those names...”

(I notice that you made the beginning a bit more generic too. ~_^)

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