i don't think you're selfish. but if you are, then so am i. because i feel the same way about my Sue(s). i really love the way Rhia has fleshed out for me. i mean, i hope you like the way that's working, too, but i love how she's so much more than what we first saw of her. and not just power-wise, but all around character-wise. she's... more dimensional. stronger. at least, she feels that way to me. and i know, had i been her, i would have done the same thing and tried to make the visions come. its good that Nathaniel is such a decent voice of reason.

Aedan's stubbornness is stubborn. and there is possibly an explanation coming up later that will help it make sense. maybe.

i'm sure Zerbrowski will figure it out. i hadn't planned on writing anything like that, but now you've put a small bug in my ear and so i'm considering... we'll see what happens. there's a little something there.

you know, i never even considered having Jean Claude make Gretchen talk. yeah, he's her master. he made her a vampire. but... its more fun letting Edward play than just using his power to do it. and maybe he looked at Edward torturing it out of her as a lesson she'd never forget. also, Edward has his reasons.

glad you liked it, honey. thanks for reading and commenting. .:smoochies:.