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Date: 2018-07-15 02:27 pm (UTC)
nanaeanaven: My Mary Sue - Rhiannon Fitzpatrick (Rhia)
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Holy fuck!

I read this over the past several days, piece by piece. Then I had to go back an re-read the beginning, because HOLY FUCK woman!

It had to be the fear that had him asserting his dominance. It felt to her almost as if he was claiming ownership over her, showing the Fates and the world that she was his and he wasn't willing to let her go without a fight.

Yes. Exactly this.

"I love you, Rhia." The words were whispered, a promise and a prayer and a plea.

I just ... I can't even....

You know, I totally expected this chapter to start with the Aedan/JC/Asher/Janika foursome. And they're ... Not. Even. Here. Maybe next chapter? If not, I guess I'll just have to use my imagination.... ;D

I thoroughly enjoyed the other bits as well. Watching Lion King? Priceless! And I'm glad I don't have to deal with Jason. LOL I think I'd have to kill him if I got held down and tickled like that.



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