nanaeanaven: My Mary Sue - Rhiannon Fitzpatrick (Rhia)
Nanaea A. Naven ([personal profile] nanaeanaven) wrote in [community profile] marysuevirus 2018-07-06 10:37 pm (UTC)

First of all, I'm sorry that it took me so damn long to get around to reading this chapter. Honestly, I can't even believe it myself. I was so eager after that cliffy in the last chapter and then just ... life. *sigh*

Poor Aedan. I'm glad the wounds were still visible when Dolph showed up. I really didn't need another reason to be pissed at him. And Lillian was great. Of course she noticed the broken wrist with just a glance. And Rafael giving her his jacket. Perfect.

All the others just getting up and surrounding her and Poor Rhia was like: She'd wanted a reason to leave early. She hadn't wanted that reason to come at the expense of one of her friends. So spot on for her.

And later, the kitty pile. Well, 3/5 of it anyway. I really expected Micah and Jason to join them. Imagine my surprise. Minette may have been surprised that Rhia stripped down, but I figure with her being all earthy magic Witch she's probably fine with casual nudity. Like, maybe not shifter-level comfortable, but still pretty laid back about it. Not like MC Nan. LOL Great ending there, hon. So fitting. Kudos!

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