cathryne: (Jean Claude 1)
Cat ([personal profile] cathryne) wrote in [community profile] marysuevirus 2018-05-30 11:41 am (UTC)

Dude...I'm so snotty right now it's not even funny. ;)

Poor Aedan...man, that girl has been through some shit hasn't she? (And by the way, the fight scene in the bathroom...EWWW! ;-) ) I love the way you handled her PTSD. I had tears in my eyes, which made it harder than hell to read I'll have you know.

And oh my god, that crack Edward made ("Jealous, old man?" about killed me. LOLOL

This was just such a powerful and emotional chapter, I don't know what else to say. Poor Aedan. Poor POOR Aedan.

Beautifully done, even the 'EWWWWWW' parts. LOL ;-) xxoo

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