First, before I forget again, your author's note says that this is the first chapter of the epic plot bunny. So did the previous two. Just fyi. No biggie.

Second: GOD DAMMIT, WOMAN! You made me cry. Break my heart with that little girl, why don't you. Jeez. *sniffles* The bit at the end with Edward hardly made up for it.

Third: How did NO ONE catch that asshole? Seriously. Vamps, shifters, Death ... how the frickin hell did he get away? Was everyone high? *sigh*

Excellent job, hon. Seriously. Totally worth the wait. :)