ext_359037 ([identity profile] ginevrasm.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] marysuevirus 2011-03-20 01:11 am (UTC)

Excellent work. I like the way the flashback is woven into the chapter and how the relationship between Dare and Remy is developing. I'm looking forward to reading more.
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