i changed nothing. this is the first, last, rough, final draft. i just had to post it in two parts because it was about 200 words too long. damned LJ

the girls are thoroughly caught up in their grandmother's story telling. i kind of am, too. this is unfolding as a story for me at the same time its unfolding for everyone else. so i'm as eager to see what comes next as the you are.

i'm glad you enjoyed it, sweetie.