I think you did great with this chapter. It's nice to see some of the police work from the actual police's point of view. And maybe it is about time that Dolph and Zerbrowski interacted with the preternatural community without Anita as a buffer. A good learning experience for them.

Damian is fun to play with since he's relatively undefined compared to many of Anita's other men. Good work with Damian and Isis, not just with the smut, which was yummy, but with developing their relationship too.