I'm glad I put off taking a shower to read this chapter, because otherwise I would have ending up needing another (cold) one. =^_^=
Loved the part about dirtying up the Gryffindor table instead, and, well, everything. I can see where it would be confusing to write, but I think you did a great job!
There are a couple other tense issues I noticed:
He slid his hand over her covered breasts and kissing(ed) softly down her neck to her collarbone, eliciting a moan in return.
All words seemed to fail her as she threw her head back and screamed, her body tensed and arching(ed) underneath him.
This could be far more fun than she thought.
Loved the part about dirtying up the Gryffindor table instead, and, well, everything. I can see where it would be confusing to write, but I think you did a great job!
There are a couple other tense issues I noticed:
He slid his hand over her covered breasts and kissing(ed) softly down her neck to her collarbone, eliciting a moan in return.
All words seemed to fail her as she threw her head back and screamed, her body tensed and arching(ed) underneath him.