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dazzledfirestar ([personal profile] dazzledfirestar) wrote in [community profile] marysuevirus 2024-03-30 05:37 am (UTC)

Oh boy, we're getting into the thick of things!

I love Dee so much. I love how she's equal parts take no shit and make everyone who matters happy. And she's right, that is very rude and disrespectful, Jean. :P I love how you play the discomfort of being with Xavier and Jean against the safety and the warmth of her extended family, and. how, when she's not faced with judgy aquaintances at best, and she's comfortable, the power shows itself.

Also that's good advice, Johnny! Take it!

I love how Warren just seems to see through the shield of Morgan's flirting. He's a smart guy, that Angel. Getting her to talk and open up through sex kind of reminded me of the birthday party in the original fic too when Dare told Logan to just get her going and she'll forget to be scared. Clearly, it works for a lot of negative behaviors.

Speaking of... oh man, I can't believe you got her to admit it to herself! Haley is in so much trouble. Thinking of herself as weak because she doesn't want to give Scott up? Yeah, that's my girl, all right. The connection between the two of them seems really strong and I can't blame her for not wanting to give him back. Now they just have to figure out how to communicate that to each other... or not. Not seems safer...

Great work hun. Looking forward to where this goes next!

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