nanaeanaven: My Mutant Sue, Roxxy, in all her many incarnations. (Roxxy)
Nanaea A. Naven ([personal profile] nanaeanaven) wrote in [community profile] marysuevirus 2024-02-15 05:17 pm (UTC)

Couldn't sleep last night, so what did I do? Yup. I read. This, to be exact.

"What ever is the problem, Miss Lafavre? Cold feet? From someone as... wanton as you?" The pause and the way the freak said wanton made it sound like he'd meant on saying slutty or whorish. Something about that didn't sit well with her. "Please, do go on. This will be the opportunity of a lifetime for you. A free pass to fornicate without judgement."

First, can I just say a huge "FUCK OFF" to Sinister? Please? Because he really needs someone to tell him (though I suspect that Dare will be more than happy to whenever she gets there).

Warren seemed...far more resigned(?) to their fate than Scott did. Or, at least, he seemed less inclined to fight against it. Him hiding Morgan with his wings was just *chef's kiss*. And that last little bit? Holy fuck! Holding out indeed.

Poor Jehnna. I honestly figured if anyone fought it would be Dare. But yeah, I can see Jehnna needing a bit more "encouragement" to accept her fate than the others. Sam was as much of a gentleman as he could have been given the circumstances.

Interesting to see the variations between the girls' reactions to everything and I think you're doing an excellent job of differentiating their internal 'voices'. Kudos, bb.

And, once again, Sinister can just go fuck the hell right off. Prick.






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