Okay this is amazing and I love every horrible thing about this. lol

I want to know more about Duke. I am kinda loving him, his broken hero worship and his clear crush on Storm. The dude has excellent taste and he cares about his team! He's a great addition to everything!

Roxxy no! Take care of yourself! I totally get her reasoning but... girl no! Here's hoping Reed and Hank can figure something out in a hurry.

Oh Johnny... he's gotten used to having her in his head and it's heartbreaking that his first instinct is to check on the link! Oh my heart hurts and wants a happy ending... eventually. lol

GOD! He's so creepy! Your Sinister voice is excellent, my dear. I have no doubt you'll have fun with his... fixations? Yeah, lets call them that. LOL

I kind of love how everyone is saying how absolutely bad this is but it's so bad that nobody is saying the thing that is so bad because they're hoping it's not that bad? If that makes sense. It gives everything so much tension and it's just the perfect amount of uncertainty and unease and skin-crawling anxiety.

Excellent work, hun! Absolutely brilliant!