I'm glad you enjoyed it, hon. I wanted that 'live tweeting' sort of feel to it. Not sure I managed it though. Honestly, re-reading it I feel like it's a bit too heavy on the quotes. *shrugs*
Yes, Rose is in over her head already. And I think you've got a valid point there about it being a sort of role-reversal from the SV story. She's trying to keep it together, but Tony's really not playing fair. So, so doomed. lol I also look forward to finding out what the other reason is for her anger. Consider me intrigued.
I have no doubt that Miri and Alex will do what they feel they have to do.
No, it doesn't make me feel any better. Well, okay. Maybe a little teeny-tiny bit better. I was all like, who the fuck is this idiot? And when the flamethrower came out my brain was like "Edward? Nah, can't be. He's not Marvel. Pffft." So, yeah, you threw me there.
And I don't think Dare would deliberately set him up like that so much as taking advantage of an opportunity as it arose, which I can totally see her doing.
I don't feel like you took liberties with Ted's personality there, but then again I think a certain author takes liberties so there you go. whatevs. I'm not sure he & Nick could get on well together for very long. I feel like they're too much alike for that.
And I don't think Roxxy has anything to fear from Edward, not really. But that doesn't mean I'm not gonna worry. LOL
No, Dare cannot go on alone like she has been. She simply cannot. And hearing voices is never good ... to borrow a line from HP.
Yeah, okay, so it wasn't much of a discussion, but at least she admitted she has feelings for him. That's a pretty big step for Dare in and of itself.
Re: Trying to respond while I read so I don't forget what I want to say....
Yes, Rose is in over her head already. And I think you've got a valid point there about it being a sort of role-reversal from the SV story. She's trying to keep it together, but Tony's really not playing fair. So, so doomed. lol I also look forward to finding out what the other reason is for her anger. Consider me intrigued.
I have no doubt that Miri and Alex will do what they feel they have to do.
No, it doesn't make me feel any better. Well, okay. Maybe a little teeny-tiny bit better. I was all like, who the fuck is this idiot? And when the flamethrower came out my brain was like "Edward? Nah, can't be. He's not Marvel. Pffft." So, yeah, you threw me there.
And I don't think Dare would deliberately set him up like that so much as taking advantage of an opportunity as it arose, which I can totally see her doing.
I don't feel like you took liberties with Ted's personality there, but then again I think a certain author takes liberties so there you go. whatevs. I'm not sure he & Nick could get on well together for very long. I feel like they're too much alike for that.
And I don't think Roxxy has anything to fear from Edward, not really. But that doesn't mean I'm not gonna worry. LOL
No, Dare cannot go on alone like she has been. She simply cannot. And hearing voices is never good ... to borrow a line from HP.
Yeah, okay, so it wasn't much of a discussion, but at least she admitted she has feelings for him. That's a pretty big step for Dare in and of itself.
You're welcome. *smoochies*